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- Code – Don’t know the way shoddy it truly is, as every thing appeared to work fantastic. So, simply needed to say good job.
It appears most individuals’s experiences have been bug-free, which is a large aid!
- Audio – Music-wise, actually favored the sync with “pull the set off” at first. But I’d look into the excessive notes that come within the tune afterwards. While the melody is okay, it is “pulling the ear” a bit bit an excessive amount of – the trick is to take the completely different devices enjoying in numerous “heights” and set them to completely different volumes, in the long run the sounds will mix extra properly. You may additionally wish to choose much less “aggresive” synths, though I get that you just in all probability needed to go “retro”. As for the sound-effects, I truly barely observed them, which implies they’re in all probability adequate for now.
I can see what you are getting at. Nearly all notes within the tune play on the similar quantity, so I’ll try to modify them to make them mix collectively a bit higher.
- Art – I agree the artwork wants lotsa work however I’ve seen worse too. I feel there are 2 largest points proper now: resolutions and colours. You ought to all the time plan your pictures greater when making them, even when you understand prematurely for certain how large the pictures should be for all of the deliberate game-resolutions. First it is going to power you to study to make higher pictures normally, second it is going to prevent when your indie plans go wild. :p Right now all the pictures are too small for frequent resolutions, and likewise there is a distinction in decision/high quality between pictures in sport (eg. background vs avatar), so I’d look into that. As for the colours, I actually do not just like the cyan partitions, they’re waaaay too saturated for a pleasant factor, in the meantime the damaging factor has nearly the identical hue however much less saturation (which can also be complicated for the participant). You wish to look into saturation of the colours normally (wanting on the screenshot, the purple might be an excessive amount of too). By the best way, the space-background seems fascinating, disgrace it is virtually hidden.
(One tip involves thoughts – balancing colours from inside the sport, or just one image at a time, is tough: After I make some sport artwork and put it in a sport, I take a screenshot and put that screenshot in a picture editor and I steadiness the colours there, that manner it is a lot simpler to make em all match collectively)
It’s all the time nice to get recommendation on the sport’s artwork! I’m very inexperienced at drawing, and suggestions like these are invaluable. I’ll attempt to take what you mentioned into consideration, and work on making the sport’s artwork extra constant and readable.
- Gameplay – Said most at first, I simply wish to add that you can in all probability make the bullets go sooner. Also the opening scene takes a bit too lengthy (the half between capturing and the opposite man shaking, there is a unusually lengthy wait).
The motive the size of time between the capturing and the man shaking is so lengthy is that one thing is definitely taking place throughout that span of time. The motive why you in all probability did not discover it’s as a result of the factor that occurs is tiny, blends in with different colours, and is general just about unattainable to see! Oops! I’ll attempt to make it extra seen sooner or later.
I performed your sport:
Also. You actually should not discuss badly about your sport. I completely perceive that it is your first sport. Putting your sport out for criticism makes you are feeling very weak. You managed to finish a sport! That’s an accomplishment not many individuals can declare. You ought to really feel pleased with that.
You point out there being a “tint” within the second display indicating you should utilize the gun to spice up your self, which is bizarre as a result of I deliberately did not add any tutorial for that mechanic.
I favored your recommendation on the finish of the video, I feel including some type of elective goal would bloat growth time previous what I would like, however the thought of letting the participant “surrender” a troublesome part and return to it later, perhaps with a bit extra expertise, actually caught with me.
I can see the way you may get the impression from the best way I write about my sport that I’m embarrassed or ashamed of it, however that could not be farther from the reality; I’m immensely pleased with having made it! Despite its shortcomings I’ve made one thing I’m very pleased with, and excited to share with individuals.
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You’re each superior! Thanks for taking part in the sport, and taking the time to offer recommendation. Have an ideal day!
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