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- Code – Don’t know the way shoddy it truly is, as all the pieces appeared to work positive. So, simply needed to say good job.
It appears most individuals’s experiences have been bug-free, which is a big reduction!
- Audio – Music-wise, actually preferred the sync with “pull the set off” to start with. But I might look into the excessive notes that come within the music afterwards. While the melody is okay, it is “pulling the ear” a bit bit an excessive amount of – the trick is to take the totally different devices enjoying in numerous “heights” and set them to totally different volumes, ultimately the sounds will mix extra properly. You may also need to choose much less “aggresive” synths, though I get that you simply most likely needed to go “retro”. As for the sound-effects, I truly barely observed them, which implies they’re most likely ok for now.
I can see what you are getting at. Nearly all notes within the music play on the similar quantity, so I’ll try to alter them to make them mix collectively a bit higher.
- Art – I agree the artwork wants lotsa work however I’ve seen worse too. I feel there are 2 greatest points proper now: resolutions and colours. You ought to all the time plan your photos greater when making them, even when you understand upfront for certain how massive the pictures must be for all of the deliberate game-resolutions. First it is going to power you to be taught to make higher photos typically, second it is going to prevent when your indie plans go wild. :p Right now all the pictures are too small for widespread resolutions, and likewise there is a distinction in decision/high quality between photos in recreation (eg. background vs avatar), so I’d look into that. As for the colours, I actually do not just like the cyan partitions, they’re waaaay too saturated for a pleasant factor, in the meantime the harmful factor has virtually the identical hue however much less saturation (which can be complicated for the participant). You need to look into saturation of the colours typically (wanting on the screenshot, the purple might be an excessive amount of too). By the way in which, the space-background seems to be fascinating, disgrace it is virtually hidden.
(One tip involves thoughts – balancing colours from inside the sport, or just one image at a time, is difficult: After I make some recreation artwork and put it in a recreation, I take a screenshot and put that screenshot in a picture editor and I steadiness the colours there, that method it is a lot simpler to make em all match collectively)
It’s all the time nice to get recommendation on the sport’s artwork! I’m very inexperienced at drawing, and ideas like these are invaluable. I’ll attempt to take what you stated into consideration, and work on making the sport’s artwork extra constant and readable.
- Gameplay – Said most to start with, I simply need to add that you may most likely make the bullets go sooner. Also the opening scene takes a bit too lengthy (the half between taking pictures and the opposite man shaking, there is a unusually lengthy wait).
The purpose the size of time between the taking pictures and the man shaking is so lengthy is that one thing is definitely occurring throughout that span of time. The purpose why you most likely did not discover it’s as a result of the factor that occurs is tiny, blends in with different colours, and is total just about unimaginable to see! Oops! I’ll attempt to make it extra seen sooner or later.
I performed your recreation:
Also. You actually should not discuss badly about your recreation. I completely perceive that it is your first recreation. Putting your recreation out for criticism makes you are feeling very weak. You managed to finish a recreation! That’s an accomplishment not many individuals can declare. You ought to really feel pleased with that.
You point out there being a “tint” within the second display screen indicating you should use the gun to spice up your self, which is bizarre as a result of I deliberately did not add any tutorial for that mechanic.
I preferred your recommendation on the finish of the video, I feel including some kind of elective goal would bloat growth time previous what I need, however the thought of letting the participant “hand over” a tough part and return to it later, possibly with a bit extra expertise, actually caught with me.
I can see the way you would possibly get the impression from the way in which I write about my recreation that I’m embarrassed or ashamed of it, however that could not be farther from the reality; I’m immensely pleased with having made it! Despite its shortcomings I’ve made one thing I’m very pleased with, and excited to share with folks.
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You’re each superior! Thanks for taking part in the sport, and taking the time to offer recommendation. Have an amazing day!
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