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- Code – Don’t understand how shoddy it truly is, as every part appeared to work effective. So, simply needed to say good job.
It appears most individuals’s experiences have been bug-free, which is a big reduction!
- Audio – Music-wise, actually preferred the sync with “pull the set off” to start with. But I might look into the excessive notes that come within the tune afterwards. While the melody is okay, it is “pulling the ear” slightly bit an excessive amount of – the trick is to take the completely different devices enjoying in several “heights” and set them to completely different volumes, ultimately the sounds will mix extra properly. You may also wish to choose much less “aggresive” synths, though I get that you simply in all probability needed to go “retro”. As for the sound-effects, I truly barely seen them, which suggests they’re in all probability adequate for now.
I can see what you are getting at. Nearly all notes within the tune play on the similar quantity, so I’ll attempt to alter them to make them mix collectively a bit higher.
- Art – I agree the artwork wants lotsa work however I’ve seen worse too. I believe there are 2 greatest points proper now: resolutions and colours. You ought to all the time plan your photographs greater when making them, even when you already know prematurely for certain how massive the pictures have to be for all of the deliberate game-resolutions. First it should drive you to study to make higher photographs usually, second it should prevent when your indie plans go wild. :p Right now all the pictures are too small for widespread resolutions, and in addition there is a distinction in decision/high quality between photographs in recreation (eg. background vs avatar), so I’d look into that. As for the colours, I actually do not just like the cyan partitions, they’re waaaay too saturated for a pleasant factor, in the meantime the damaging factor has virtually the identical hue however much less saturation (which can also be complicated for the participant). You wish to look into saturation of the colours usually (trying on the screenshot, the purple might be an excessive amount of too). By the way in which, the space-background seems attention-grabbing, disgrace it is virtually hidden.
(One tip involves thoughts – balancing colours from inside the sport, or just one image at a time, is difficult: After I make some recreation artwork and put it in a recreation, I take a screenshot and put that screenshot in a picture editor and I steadiness the colours there, that means it is a lot simpler to make em all match collectively)
It’s all the time nice to get recommendation on the sport’s artwork! I’m very inexperienced at drawing, and ideas like these are invaluable. I’ll attempt to take what you mentioned under consideration, and work on making the sport’s artwork extra constant and readable.
- Gameplay – Said most to start with, I simply wish to add that you could possibly in all probability make the bullets go quicker. Also the opening scene takes a bit too lengthy (the half between taking pictures and the opposite man shaking, there is a unusually lengthy wait).
The motive the size of time between the taking pictures and the man shaking is so lengthy is that one thing is definitely occurring throughout that span of time. The motive why you in all probability did not discover it’s as a result of the factor that occurs is tiny, blends in with different colours, and is total just about not possible to see! Oops! I’ll attempt to make it extra seen sooner or later.
I performed your recreation:
Also. You actually should not discuss badly about your recreation. I completely perceive that it is your first recreation. Putting your recreation out for criticism makes you’re feeling very weak. You managed to finish a recreation! That’s an accomplishment not many individuals can declare. You ought to really feel happy with that.
You point out there being a “tint” within the second display screen indicating you should utilize the gun to spice up your self, which is bizarre as a result of I deliberately did not add any tutorial for that mechanic.
I preferred your recommendation on the finish of the video, I believe including some kind of elective goal would bloat growth time previous what I need, however the concept of letting the participant “surrender” a tough part and return to it later, perhaps with a bit extra expertise, actually caught with me.
I can see the way you would possibly get the impression from the way in which I write about my recreation that I’m embarrassed or ashamed of it, however that could not be farther from the reality; I’m immensely happy with having made it! Despite its shortcomings I’ve made one thing I’m very proud of, and excited to share with folks.
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You’re each superior! Thanks for taking part in the sport, and taking the time to provide recommendation. Have an awesome day!
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