Michael, it is true that publishers will overlook some points together with your sport, and will not count on perfection.
But, to make use of the gem analogy, a jeweler will not settle for a diamond that is nonetheless partially embedded in rock.
From the content material you have shared, I’d say that the demos want much more polish earlier than they’d be accepted. It’s not a nasty sport thought, however issues like sound design and graphical design are essential. I had a sport get rejected by GoG some time again, however they mentioned the one motive was as a result of it was too informal and that I ought to pitch it to cell corporations. They took over three weeks to reject it (they mentioned, on the time, they’d get again inside 4 enterprise days) as a result of they had been going backwards and forwards about whether or not to publish it or not. So, it was a detailed name for them. The stars did not align for me, both, however I should not have given up.
This is what the sport seemed like:

I despatched them a playable demo with 5 ranges, all of the sound and music and a whole vertical slice of sport play. This is extra alongside the traces of what you want once you’re in search of a writer. And, not each sport you make a vertical slice for will get revealed. I ended up deciding that I did not wish to work on this sport anymore and gave up on getting a writer, however I should not have.
Also, please attempt to do not forget that it is your sport that’s below a microscope and a rejection is not a private assault. It’s simply a sign that the sport both would not match that writer’s objectives, or that it wants extra work earlier than you search publishing.
As for the press launch, it wasn’t picked up as a result of it is incomplete. Press will need the article to be copy-pastable out of your press launch. It’s not a nasty thought to rent a author for this half to proof learn and edit your article earlier than you ship it out as a press launch. Game journalists get heaps of those on a regular basis, so the most effective/most full articles will get revealed. Take inspiration from present sport articles and press releases, comply with the frequent system.
I’d encourage you to develop your sport additional should you suppose it has potential. Get neighborhood suggestions and search publishing solely once you’re on the level the place you might be able to create the majority of the sport’s content material and a lot of the smaller particulars like foley are labored out already.
Keep working at it. I do know that rejection is discouraging however once you get rejected simply say “okay, thanks on your time” and put your nostril to the grinding stone. Polish the hell out of your vertical slice and you will get real curiosity from publishers and indie convention organizers.